Almost Lovers

almost-lovers

Written for November Notes, hosted by Rosema at A Reading Writer and Sarah at Heartstring Eulogies. Come and have a go at the musical fun.

Day 1 Music Prompt: Almost Lovers by A Fine Frenzy.

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That’s awesome. Really captivating in such a small piece.

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I do like the ‘might have been’ concept – very fruitful in terms of the imagery invoked. Love your idea – well matched by the background image.

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Oh Wowza….just a glance…this is heart-throbbingly wonderful, Davy, and I love that it’s through a bus window. Very nice “common experience” touch 🙂

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Reminds me of my school days where glances and quick smiles made hearts flutter and minds wonder 🙂

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I am smiling Davy….that “might have been” is so captivating..

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Beautiful senryu. You captured so much in such a fleeting glance

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So nice. I love the imagery and tone. You make us feel as if we’re on that bus.

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so much in so few, Davy. Sigh. Sigh.

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I agree with Rosema. This speaks so much in so few words, D. Poignant and profound. </3

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I liked the concept here as I’m a lover of imaginary things ❤

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Just getting up to date on your recent work, Davy. I have to say, I loved this one. So very sweet and touching!

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