Love Hurts

love-hurts

Written for November Notes, hosted by Rosema at A Reading Writer and Sarah at Heartstring Eulogies.

Day 4 Music Prompt: Between the Lines by Sara Bareilles.

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Love it Davy. Beautifully penned.

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GEEZ!! This piece surely throbs! Great, intense word choices, Davy!

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Ooooohhhh…no amount of words can explain how it hit me hard…

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And as Rosey would say, “Fierce!” 🙂

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Heart-felt!
I can so relate to this. This really hurts 😦

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geeeez Davy! this hurts!! hard!

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Oh dear. This put a dagger to my hopeless romantic heart. *sigh*

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Love this! Great mental imagery blending with the words. I loved the last line “Ending the Torment”. But the thought ran through my mind, having been through “An Ending” that they probably weren’t really that lucky. Torment, separation and endings usually take a long time to end and they leave scars in the mind and soul too, if one is lucky enough to survive the experience. Another powerful three lines!! Kudos.

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I think I love that version the best!

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