Inside the Mind of Davy D
Where Words and Worlds Collide in Poetry
November 5, 2016
Crime, Criminal, Final Score, Final-Score Tetralogy, Fiona Apple, Head, November Notes, Plan, Poetry, Retribution, Senryu
Written for November Notes hosted by Rosema at A Reading Writer and Sarah at Heartstring Eulogies.
Day 5 Music Prompt: Criminal by Fiona Apple.
Indeed what is needed is a final score..
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It leaves the door open for a follow up and more poetry. Thanks for reading and taking time out to comment Mich. Have a good weekend:)
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Oh, yes. Topicality and controversy all in one fell haiku.
Thank you Roland. Inspired by Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels. Enjoy your weekend.
Oh wow. I like how it seems like the start of a bigger project.
Thank you Sarah. It has made me think that there could be more. Thanks for taking time out to comment 🙂
Ooh! What are they plotting? I like how it ends and at the same time feels like something is just beginning.
There may be some future installments NJ. Stay tuned 🙂
Looking forward to them 🙂
I love the “crime heads” part, especially. You can imagine a bunch of heads looking down at something on a table of sorts – no faces, just heads. But maybe you mean heads as in leaders, or both heads and leaders. I’m visual, so I see, literally, a bunch of heads. Very cool, Davy D.
I hope that it provokes many images Laura. I am visual also and that is why I provide my poems with images it helps to kick start the process. I am told this is not the way by some poetry purists. Thanks for taking time to read and comment and enjoy your Sunday 🙂
i agree. i think there is more in this haunting piece! 😀
Thank you. I am thinking about some further instalments to develop this Rosema. I appreciate the feedback 🙂
that sounds like a great plan, Davy!
Oooh, this raises goosebumps, reminders of The Godfather–a bit frightening in the anticipation. I’d love more follow-up, Davy 🙂
Thank you Delyn. I will have to put my mind as to how this could be progressed in an Haiku / Senryu form 🙂
In your spare time…when you’re not doing DIY projects 🙂 🙂
DIY projects Delyn – isn’t that writing poetry? 🙂
Hahaha–yes, of course it is, Davy!!
Intriguing! I’ll be looking forward to what happens next along with everybody here.. Clever one, D!
Thank you Maria. Looks like I need to get down to work and write some sequels. I appreciate you taking time out to read and comment.
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