Laptop Love


laptop-loveIllustration Credit: Davy D


Inbox dings.
“Endless love” from
The girl of my dreams.
She wants to meet me, kiss,
Hold me, whisper sweet nothings.
The cursor caresses her smile.
For “one thousand pounds” she will be mine.
This affair ends now. SELECT ALL – DELETE.


Written for November Notes, hosted by Rosema at A Reading Writer and Sarah at Heartstring Eulogies.

Day 8 Music Prompt: Perfect Strangers by Jonas Blue.




Lovely poem and picture – it made me smile 🙂

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goodness. that twist. Not sure if i’ll laugh or i’ll cry!!! 😀 😀 😀

Great take, Davy!

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That shift was something to remember!

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What a peculiar and beautiful love story.

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Oh dear…FABULOUS poem with a great twist ending, Davy!!

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Here I’m going ‘awww’, and in the end ‘bam!’ I agree with Rose. I don’t know whether to laugh or to feel bad for the poor thing 😀

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Cleverly worked out pyramid. Triangular thinking with a neat point to make.

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A cute romance -comedy in the making Davy..

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And oohhhh i almost miss that..its an etheree …yey….so glad you did it…

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I did not see that coming! Well done, D. And I must say, I’m loving your illustrations. 🙂

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Haha! That was something not so usual. You always write unique. I loved this one.

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This made me smile this morning, thanks

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