Inside the Mind of Davy D
Where Words and Worlds Collide in Poetry
November 17, 2016
Brave Enough, Bravery, Friends, Heart, Lindsey Stirling ft Christina Perri, Love, November Notes, Opportunity, Plead, Poetry, Senryu
Written for November Notes hosted by Rosema at A Reading Writer and Sarah at Heartstring Eulogies.
Day 17 Music Prompt: Brave Enough by Lindsey Stirling featuring Christina Perri.
I guess that when we want to create something of our own, we are somehow tempted to seize the opportunity that will make us stop coping with hustling towards what we want to achieve, and it really takes a lot of bravery to say ‘no, i want to achieve something of my own.’ Beautiful motivational words.
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Thank you Christa. I suppose the challenge is always to find our own way. I am glad you liked the poem and appreciate you taking time out to enjoy and comment 🙂
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Nice, Davy. I love the way it’s visually set up. I don’t know much about poetry. I’m guessing there’s a name for that?
Laura, that makes two of us on the poetry knowledge 🙂 With most of my poetry I try to follow the Haiku / Senryu structure in which the poem has 17 syllables set in 3 lines of 5 syllables, 7 syllables then 5 syllables. The rest is just experimentation. Thank you for taking time out to comment.
Ah, this is lovely!
Thank you Sarah, your kind words are appreciated 🙂
Neat! Clever to find a 5-syllable one-word opening line, and to finish with that element of yearning.
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Thank you Roland. Your kind feedback is greatly appreciated.
yeah i have been struggling to find the right word to describe the emotions i feel here.. until i scrolled down the comments ..thanks Roland its “yearning”
I appreciate that Mich. It is motivating to see that the poems bring out different things in different people. I am again appreciative of your time taken out to read and comment 🙂
I loved the edit ❤
Thank you Kavita. Your kind feedback is appreciated. It seemed to flow better that way 🙂
This is extremely clever. And, very motivating. I love the way you’ve placed the words too.
Thank you NJ. The lines in the fence somehow matched the way I wanted to place emphasis on certain words. I appreciate your kind words and feedback.
I love the visuals with the words.
Thank you Anne. I am glad you like it. Thank you also for taking time out to visit the blog and to read and comment.
This is GOOD, Davy–it takes courage to love, truly; heck, it even takes courage to have a friendship….
Thank you Delyn and you are right all relationships take courage. Thanks again for taking time out to read and comment 🙂
You’re most welcome always 🙂
woooooow. so much in so few, Davy!
Thank you Rosema. Your kind words are much appreciated 🙂
you’re always welcome, Davy! 😀
Thank you Gemstars for the link up. It is much appreciated 🙂
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