Inside the Mind of Davy D
Where Words and Worlds Collide in Poetry
November 20, 2016
Colbie Caillat, Dance, Downpour, Floodgates, November, November Notes, Pavement, Pedestrian, Poetry, Polka, Run, Scream, Tanka, Tyre, Umbrella, Waterfall
Written for November Notes hosted by Rosema at A Reading Writer and Sarah at Heartstring Eulogies.
Day 20 Music Prompt: Floodgates by Colbie Caillat.
Yes, Davy … & an apposite comment on a morning like this in the S.E. !
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Thank you Roland. The bad weather hasn’t hit us yet in Haddenham. I hope you were not too badly affected.
love the imagery you painted, Davy! 🙂 can see, hear and feel each word!
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Thank you Rosema. And the Universe celebrated this poem by sending us two days of heavy rain and it’s still falling 🙂
oh geez!!!! keep safe!
It has subsided now after two and a half days Rosema. Some parts of England, south of where I live, had really bad flooding. We seemed to have missed the worse.
oh. i have one friend from England and she said it’s really snowing and raining hard. geez. be safe.
Thank you Rosema, that is appreciated 🙂
you’re welcome! 😀
An entire life described in only few words – a true master-piece Davy 🙂
Thank you Maja. Those words coming from such a wonderful poet mean a lot 🙂
You are welcome, and thanks for the compliment 🙂
Not a problem Maja, you deserve it. Have a great week 🙂
I loved the title.
Thank you Kavita, I am glad you enjoyed it 🙂
I love it, Davy! California could use some of that. Send it over.
As I am writing this Laura we are into our second day of continuous heavy rain. I would gladly send you over some. Glad you enjoyed the poem 🙂
Ooooh love it!
Thank you Sarah, that is most appreciated 🙂
Love that last line…”scream at pavements.” Very original and I can feel their agony!
Thank you Gilda, there is nothing worse that being drenched by a speeding car. I appreciate you taking time out to visit and comment 🙂
Haha, you’ve captured the feeling well! You are welcome!
I can just picture people doing exactly as you say.
Thank you NJ. I hope you are not dancing in the rain like we are in the UK at the moment 🙂
Haha, no. Not at all. Monsoon is done with. Bracing for chilly times ahead 🙂
Likewise in the UK. They are forecasting a cold winter here. More time in the poetry den writing 🙂
A beautiful imagery … so vivid.. i can see it clearly through my head..
Thank you Mich. I am glad the poem sparked the pictures and thank you for taking time out to read and comment 🙂
Love the umbrellas running for cover–Brilliant!
Thank you Delyn. We have had plenty of practice over the past few days 🙂
Oh yes, lots of rain–we had a sunny break today, quite unexpected 🙂
It is nice to get that break from it Delyn. Things have calmed down over here in the UK 🙂
Glad to hear it, Davy–I wonder, are you expecting snow for winter? Last year I think we only got 6 flakes–very strange, though I appreciate not having to walk in perilous icy conditions 🙂
They are forecasting a hard winter here in the UK, but they do that most years and we don’t get much 🙂
Ahh, better to be prepared for the worst, I suppose 🙂
This one’s fun Davy. It’s imaginative, the mix of images makes me want to read again.
Cheers David. I am glad it had that effect.
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