Davy, that’s lovely. I love the attention to detail–sensuous slow movements of her hands.

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Aww, this is lovely. Brought a smile to my face 🙂

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What a magnificent scene you have painted with your words , Da vy.

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Ohhhh myyyyy–Davy, this is exquisite, leaves me hushed ❤

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Mood music for the ageing soul. Lovely images – in words and picture, Davy.

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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.

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You have created lovely images here, in thoughts and imagery.

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oooh. this is sweet and sexy tooooo! loving the feels!

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There is so much to love about this poem! For instance, I love how you made it an old man, rather than a young man. It suggests to me a deep appreciation of her gracefulness, and it adds a bit of nostalgia to the poem. At least for me.

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Sweet and subtly erotic at the same time.

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