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Spectacular! Epic verse. So much said in so few words. Let’s the reader think deeply.

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Very powerful and thought provoking

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Your verses, Davy, express your thoughts in a powerfully compact form, brimming with images which breed further images, and rippling with deeper meaning. This is one of your best.

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Standing ovation for this one. Wow!

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Had to read this slowly a few times. Deep & meaningful verse. Extremely powerful message!

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Very powerful, succinct, and much needed reflection on the current state of things.
(I personally think there are a lot of cracks in Darwin’s armour…that could be a long conversation 🙂 )

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    Thank you Vanessa, just seem to be bombarded by news of wars and conflict around the world, as well as politicians reeling out lies and soundbites. It made me think about how we are evolving. Thanks for the insightful comment and would like to have that conversation some time.

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Hi, Davy! You’ve been nominated for the One Lovely Blogger Award. I wanted to show my appreciation for all the continued support since I started my blog back in January! Hugs!
https://urbanpoetry2017.com/2017/05/17/one-lovely-blogger-award/

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Davy, this is powerful writing. Your images are very strong, so much so that I reread the verses several times. Well done!

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the depth of this! powerful depictions! and that last line! wow

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Thought provoking, indeed. With everything happening around the world, these are powerful words that make you ponder deeply.

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Profound. Thanks Mr D for sharing these thoughts.

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