Falling

Falling

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the purpose may just be a little elusive right then. don’t give up. I loved this though. reaching out even when knowing the other pulls away. be persistent if you believe in something worth fighting for. I ramble!! ☺

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… No intent
… No content.
There’s a clever wistful tension in your verse, Davy.

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You described so well what we all have experienced at one time or another. I like how you captured this feeling, even though it’s not a comfortable one.

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That Is so sadly evocative.

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Oh my….the realization that I am alone. Great writing, Davy.

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Wow just heart wrenching.

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Oooohh..that empty space..it broke my heart..

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Echoes of our fragility. Hauntingly beautiful.

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Oh, You hit me in a tender spot, My Friend! A perfect capture of gone, melancholy and lonely! So Glad that is all in the past! A vivid flashback indeed!
Hope you are having a Great Sunday!

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We all have our empty spots. It never is easy.

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oh the weight of your words.

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