Life

Life

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Reads beautifully, Davy… And you managed to get a rhyme in there too.

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The best I read. Omg. Awesome one. This is so good, Davy.

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Nice one, Davy. Perhaps it’s nice to let the blackbird take over from time to time?

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    So true Laura. I should work for the United Nations lol. Thanks for taking time to read and comment.

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      I hope you didn’t take that to mean that I think you should give it a rest because your poetry is no good! I think you were jesting. I meant that it’s funny how life keeps going and that taking a break can be a good thing–not the end of the world. Our concerns seem inconsequential in the bigger picture.

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      The thought never crossed my mind Laura. The United Nations comment was borne through spending the last couple of weeks acting as a referee between the cat and blackbird lol. And you make a very good point about our concerns, they pale in insignificance compared to what’s happening in and to our world.

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Ooohh…so beautiful as always..

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Beautiful…in just a couple of words, you’ve captured the flow of life. 🙂

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This is a masterpiece, Davy. Wow!

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So TC was bluffing?
I like the layers 🙂

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Oh I think I need a blackbird to take over whenever I’m AWOL– which is always. Hah!

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A poem formed from no poem, very clever! I love this Davy.

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